They are well written and really catches the readers attention. "Hereafter" leaves my heart racing after reading each new chapter, "Pigment and Clay" has a lot of promise to it, and finally my favorite, "Barbed Wire Dreams", it really makes me anxious reading it and hoping things end well for both of them. All in all they are amazing and who knows, maybe you'll become a world famous writer one day. If you do, use your screenname, ScaraMedn, as the author name for your stories.